User talk:Jmmatthews5/sandbox
Review 1: Jenna Harrison Rubric 4 New References: There are four references however the section on self preservation is not cited at all and the paragraph after on self destructive behavior only has one source. In the final article the second section needs to be cited and all sections should probably have information pulled from more than one source.
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Strategy to complete the article: There are title headings that can be expanded on. Need to add examples to self preservation and self destructive behavior to fulfill the requirement of 2 examples from published evolutionary studies. Also need to add the links to other Wikipedia articles.
Overall good some of the wording could be changed to make the point more concise and in places examples would help a lot to clear up the meanings of some off the concepts described. Jnharrison1 (talk) 18:59, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
editI thought your introductionary ideas on self-preservation are well-thought out and would be good additions. I would suggest considering your perspective on the self-destructive section. I would only add it if it's essential to the explanation of self-presevation. Good luck! Jackson Francis (talk) 05:19, 18 November 2017 (UTC)Jackson Francis