User:Jjac118/Jjac118 These are my suggested edits.
- Opinion stated in first two sentences. Stay neutral.
- Not everyone thinks the use of the word “man” to encompass all of mankind is outdated
- Not everyone thinks gender-neutral language is seen as good practice
- Other edits are good! Sfran22 (talk) 13:17, 27 October 2015 (UTC)Reply
