User talk:Jerrial/Lakeshore Drive (New Orleans)

Hi, I left a peer review for you. Raelanes (talk) 01:47, 4 March 2021 (UTC)

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You've got the framework for a good article here. I appreciate the material you've been able to add to the infobox already. The "Attractions Along the Street" section (which needs a more concise name) gives you a lot to work with. See if you can develop a paragraph for several of those things that explains the significance of the connection to Lakeshore Drive. We don't want just lists. Those aren't useful. jtodd1973 15:40, 9 March 2021 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jtodd1973 (talk • contribs)