User talk:Jedidiah.e.obomighie/sandbox

Lead Section Comments:

• I think you gave a good description of what the overall test is about
• I like that you added steps and a process for how the general sense of the test works
• This section could be expanded by listing other contributing scientists and methods for the test\
• Add more detail/background. It was on the shorter side
• Good sources

Lead section comments for Jordan Port:

• The description about what the topic was direct and to the point.
• You gave ways in which the test could be presented to the subject.
• There were no paragraphs which I think could be added to give the lead section a better presentation.
• I believe more points could be added to the section. The section was a bit too short and the information given wasn't enough.Jedidiah.e.obomighie (talk) 10:05, 30 October 2018 (UTC)

Feedback

@Jedidiah.e.obomighie, Sarah.olson.1, and JordanPorteous: Nice work. A few final fixes

• The year on the Edward Thorndike ref (#5) is 190. I think you're missing a digit :)
• Bold the article title, and nothing else. Only use italics for things like book titles.
• Add some links to other articles - terms or people that the average user might be unfamiliar with the first time they appear should be bolded.
• Only capitalize proper nouns. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:02, 7 December 2018 (UTC)