User talk:Jasminegpaz/LGBT stereotypes

Hi!

I do not see your page up for a peer review , however, I will comment on a few things on your article you can generally improve on it. Maybe you can take it into account as you change it.

Improvements can be made in a couple of areas:

The lead should provide a general summary of the body, in this case nothing about intersectionality is mentioned at the start but if you decide to keep that part in the body, it would be good to have a line or two addressing the intersectional aspect.

The in general area is really short and non-specific. To be honest, since this is a broad topic I suggest creating a list of common stereotypes presented in the media rather than creating a very long and extensive list, I feel this is more manageable.

I think a lot of the stereotypes discussed give a long explanation about the movies context and plotline even though it may not be entirely relevant especially under the lesbians sub-section.

The origins and prevalence is difficult, if you choose to keep it I suggest finding better research to validate it. However, it is rather difficult to pinpoint the frequency use of these stereotypes and where they originated from.

As of now these are my early thoughts, please feel free to reach out if you have questions or simply you want me to look over your updated works! Ncarril4 (talk) 19:30, 25 February 2022 (UTC)

Hi Jasmine,

I agree with everything Nelly says above, I have also added to your peer review page! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roxlindy (talk • contribs) 02:29, 25 April 2022 (UTC)