User talk:Jameswang323/Civic Intelligence/Maxack37 Peer Review

Thank you for your comments and reviews. From your review, it seems like you want to expand the lead section and improve the tone and the flow of my paragraphs. I will do so by proofreading my sentences and fix the grammar errors! I will put more content in the lead section such as more definitions regarding the political and economic aspects of Civic Intelligence.Jameswang323 (talk) 00:59, 19 October 2019 (UTC)James Wang