User talk:James Nie/sandbox
Latest comment: 4 years ago by Yuting Cui
Your draft's structure makes people a little confused, you should better use a list like heading and sub-heading to let people see more clearly. In addition, you can change the cites format, such as the first one, it did not show the website link to let people check the resources. (Yuting Cui (talk) 04:04, 21 November 2019 (UTC))