Already done. Guoguo12--Talk-- 01:17, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! I have made the edit you suggested. As a newbie I wasn't thinking of the bold as anything but a heading. It is now part of the first sentence. Jamalaka (talk) 13:27, 29 December 2010 (UTC)jamalaka

Sorry, but the suggestion I supposedly made ("You start your article with [...] don't leave the beginning as it is now") wasn't written by me, but by User:Aperisic in this edit. I put "already done" to indicate that the article was already published, by you. Sorry about that. Still, if you need any help, just contact me at my talk page. Guoguo12--Talk--  14:29, 29 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Hoping someone will approve my article and take away its temporary status! Jamalaka (talk) 15:40, 29 December 2010 (UTC)JamalakaReply

Done. Guoguo12--Talk--  19:41, 29 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

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