TA Comments:
In-text citations: yes
Professional tone: yes
Paraphrasing real science: yes
Grammar and spelling: Some sentences do not make sense as written. For instance, the beginning of this sentence “Although at first this suggested application to problems in space physics, Levine and his collaborators have shown…” needs to be rewritten.
Links to other wiki articles: none
Score: 17/20
Peer Review:
The opening sentence of the first paragraph suggests that Professor Levine literally worked under extreme conditions of temperature and pressure (e.g. he worked in the harsh cold of Siberia or the heat of African deserts or at 10k meters altitude, you get the idea). Last sentence - what calculations? which studies? which predictions? Please elaborate a little. But, other than that, good content in the first paragraph. In the second paragraph, can you please introduce quantum dots and describe what they are. After reading through the paragraph, I am no closer to understanding their function/purpose. For Professor Levine's research on the chemistry of multi-electronic states, could you perhaps either "beef up" that section or merge it to a different one? As it stands, it's a tad small. Also, standardize your capitalization of subject topics. Overall, content is solid and explanatory but needs a tiny bit of tweaking here and there.
SARAVI, TALIA Peer Review Score: 20/20