User talk:Isabellalonghin99/sandbox
Good work - you have written a lot! The language is quite complex and needs to be simplified and made more 'encyclopedic'. I have made some changes (you can see by looking at the history) but more need to be made. You need to include sources at the end of each paragraph at least, and do not include direct links to external sources in the text, but only in the references. --Calfux22 (talk) 05:56, 14 May 2022 (UTC) The section on the Istituto Svizzero reads more like a promotional text than encyclopedia - try removing some of the 'positive spin' and cutting parts of the text. --Calfux22 (talk) 06:10, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
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edit@Isabellalonghin99: Hi, instead to have references in the title of the sections please put them in the content --Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd) (talk) 13:41, 14 May 2022 (UTC)