User talk:Irishkimchi246/AIDSFoundationOfChicago
-I felt like adding the project part of the wiki was important for your wiki page and I am glad that you do have it and explain what type of work your organization is working on. -I think that you should move the ‘services’ portion to the top right before the ‘history’ portion. I also think that the information in your lead is important but that some of the information is better placed in the ‘service’ portion part of the wiki. -create a simpler lead -I think that it would be useful to add a project’s part to the anti-cruelty society to make the wiki stronger --Imadoor98 (talk) 21:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review
editI like your current overview of your article it makes sense and helps understand what the AFC does. I think an important change to make would be how you reference the foundation. For example, you note it as "AFC" but it needs to be consistent throughout the article. I suggest sticking with the entirety of the name. Something I really liked about your article is it's length. It doesn't feel like a heavy load but it has a lot of information. I would suggest moving up the "services" section higher, if not after the "history". Also, if you can't add to the history part, i'd make it part of the overview since it is a sentence already mentioned there. Lastly, I really like the little info box you guys created on the right of the article. I hope to add one to my article.
Gsanch32 (talk) 22:08, 19 April 2020 (UTC)gsanch32