User talk:Ingrid chanhy/sandbox

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@Ingrid chanhy: Good start on an article. I don't think it's quite ready to be published yet:

• Although your article has tons of information, it includes some things which I think have more detail than what one would expect in an encyclopedia article on the street. For example, the tram fare, etc., seem like minor tangential details that would not really of interest to most general readers. The specifics of buslines are impressive but might be more detail than is necessary.
• References are the biggest concern. I don't see any citations which establish the notability of the article. Can you find references in newspapers, journals, books, etc., that describe the street in detail? The closest thing in your article is the reference from the Hong Kong transport department but they don't seem like a third party source in this regard.

Keep working on in, especially on WP:NOTE and then ping me on Wikipedia again when you think the article is ready and I'll let you know what I think. —mako๛ 23:37, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

@Benjamin Mako Hill: I had a bad asthma attack last week which made me unable to complete my schoolwork and now I am seriously behind schedule. I have just published my article on Russell Street, please let me know your thoughts on this. Again I apologize for my late submission of homework.Ingrid chanhy (talk) 16:07, 31 October 2015 (UTC)

@Ingrid chanhy: Looks good! —mako๛ 22:37, 5 November 2015 (UTC)