I'm Fixed Now, I Ran a Test!

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You were reverted because your edits did not add anything substantial to the article. You changed "veer" to "swerve wildly across the street and veer" (unnecessary detail, as "veer" is an adequate description already), and what the media headlines proclaim is irrelevant to the plot of this story - all that's needed is that he did get inducted into the ELOE. It is an ongoing effort to keep WP plot descriptions from getting bloated with extraneous trivial details (bad example: "the death ray, which is really the freeze ray with a piece of masking tape on it that says "death ray", was fired by his right hand as Billy, otherwise known as Dr Horrible, fell to the ground as he walked down the middle aisle of the auditorium after confronting a group of people who were wearing Captain Hammer tshirts which were different colors than the ones they were wearing earlier on the street corner as they sang a different song" could be summed up with better with what is currently in the article. And even that could probably be tightened up a little bit, I'm sure. SpikeJones (talk) 15:35, 20 December 2008 (UTC)