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Jacob Johnson Peer Review

Hi Hank,

This article is super interesting, and I think you've done a really good job of explaining the historical context. I can definitely see how it relates to the course regarding subjects like copyrights and intellectual property. I would encourage, if you can, finding a visual for your page, as I think it would help with the article's presentation. Perhaps you might want to list notable historical uses and citations of the idea of a thought collective, if there any? It may help with linking your article to the fields of science and discovery as a whole.

Hey Jacob,

Thanks for the suggestions, I had trouble locating an image general enough to include seeing as the article pertains to a broad concept used to refer to many different specific scientific practices throughout history. I plan to bolster this article with a further analysis chapter by chapter for the final, so I may be able to find something applicable with more analysis.