User talk:HarrisonFranken/sandbox
Latest comment: 5 years ago by Pinyayta in topic Feedback - Tim
Feedback - Tim
editVery informative for what the original article is. Much more information included in a very well structured way. Needs more references, though, and citations throughout the paragraphs.Pinyayta (talk) 19:20, 22 October 2018 (UTC)