User talk:GrantDrum/Palermo

Evaluations

2/28/2018 Evaluation by Kyeanna Henry

Spelling/Grammar

Meets standard. There are a few grammatical mistakes (Patron Saints paragraph 4, Sports paragraph 2 second sentence, Capital Culture last sentence, and Mafia last sentence) that can be improved before sending in the final draft. No spelling errors.

Language

Exceeds standard. Good tone.

Organization

Exceeds standard. Very well organized.

Coding

Exceeds standard.

Validity

Exceeds standard.

Completion

Meets standard. A few more sources needed to meet the minimum requirement.

Relevance

Meets standard.

Sources

Nearly meets standard. A few more sources needed to meet the minimum requirement. (I believe we need 15 sources)

Citations

Exceeds standard.

References

Meets standard.

2/28/2018 Evaluation by Yussef13

Spelling/Grammar

Meets standard. You should revise some portions of writing and check for a couple of grammatical errors that showed up.

Language

Exceeds standard. You did a great job writing and expressing your ideas.

Organization

Meets standard. I think that the organization of your writing is well done.

Coding

Exceeds standard. Good.

Validity

Exceeds standard. Valid information

Completion

Meets standard. Complete.

Relevance

Meets standard. Information is relevant. Nice job.

Sources

Exceeds standard. More than enough sources.

Citations

Exceeds standard. Great citations.

References

Exceeds standard. Relevant and adequate references.