User talk:Graceswilson/Aesthetic medicine

Aesthetic Medicine Peer Review

Ensure to provide a transition from your introduction to your examples. Include images of the "forehead flap." Include a specific example, possibly derived from a case study, of nasal defect repairs via forehead flap techniques. Review performed from sandbox edit of "Aesthetic Medicine." N-methyl-1-phenylpropan-2-amine (talk) 15:00, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

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You should add a subheading explaining more about the Indian origins and how they performed this surgery; it seems incredibly interesting! Also a supplemental image would help readers picture what the final product looked like. Agstphn (talk) 15:05, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

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Great introduction! It flows really well into what your topic is about and I really like your sources. Useroh29 (talk) 15:10, 14 February 2023 (UTC)

Feedback from Prof. Grant

Grace, what wonderful work!

Here are some things that might be helpful:

History of Forehead Flap (book): https://pascal-clemson.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01PASCAL_CLEM/kfbmsp/alma991014080468205612

Greek Roman Medical History (book): https://pascal-clemson.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01PASCAL_CLEM/kfbmsp/alma991014080468205612

Egyptian Medicine (book): https://pascal-clemson.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01PASCAL_CLEM/kfbmsp/alma991010493679705612

FDA Approved Fillers (website): https://www.fda.gov/medical-devices/aesthetic-cosmetic-devices/fda-approved-dermal-fillers

Injectable (book): https://pascal-clemson.primo.exlibrisgroup.com/permalink/01PASCAL_CLEM/kfbmsp/alma9911319662305611

See if these help! AMGTigers (talk) 15:02, 23 February 2023 (UTC)