User talk:Goffe.2/sandbox

Instructor Comments No. 2

Well-written

• Lead Section has Geography in it, Move it out into its own section.
• Well Written for the most part. Minor copy editing nessecary.

Verifiable with no original research

• You need to incorporate more citations.

Broad in its coverage

• Good diversity of information.

Neutral

• Good work.

Stable

• No Comments.

Illustrated

• You need to get some photos of the area in here. Try to find historic photos; these are out of copyright and can be used.
• Add an infobox.

164.107.47.208 (talk) 16:38, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Holly Hill will be one of the more difficult ones to do by just working on it online

• Look at The County Auditors Site and start to get a better picture of where the "Holly Hill" Subdivison is - or better yet contact them.
• If you contact the Auditor, you should be able to view Plat Maps and determine the developer.
• Geography: Is there a sign for Holly Hill (HINT: There is) that identifies it?
• Is it just a suburban neighborhood? How many plats are there in it? (HINT: Somewhere around 12).
• What year was it annexed into the City of Columbus?
• Is it part of the Greater Hilltop Area?

If you want to continue with this, I'd be fine with that, but I'd suggest you switch to Westgate (which is Nearby and has Camp Chase Confederate Cemetery and a lot of History).

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 16:16, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

2nd Draft

Notes from the class editor: Needs more citations in all of the sections, other than that, a solid article. Kowalski.118 (talk) 13:14, 9 December 2014 (UTC)