Gerardo's Peer Review
edit- Great amount of information given. I think there are also a good amount of sources given for each paragraph.
- I would include more of the physical description on the artworks. The mediums used, what kind of material, etc.
- Maybe work on the spacing of the text so the paragraphs are not too far away.
- Possibly include more information and sources that that listed as the main topics on the top of the page.
- The links work and the sources, well done!
- I think you are on the last stages of editing just add the text needed in the last artwork, and beef up each paragraph with more analysis and detail. Minor touch-ups on the look of the text, bold, capitalization, etc.
Peer review by Ava Gleason