User talk:GarrettErb/sandbox

Comments on Bibliography

Garrett: Most of your chosen references are web pages, but there are some good articles in the spreadsheet for your topic: Auyila, Nurhidayat, Scheyer, and Wicaksono. Also, four of your citations in the list were duplicates of previous contributors and one was a blog; I have removed these.Njclum (talk) 22:28, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Outline

Garrett: Very thorough outline. Good work.Njclum (talk) 01:36, 22 November 2016 (UTC)

Comments on Rough Draft

Garrett: Excellent job. Well-organized, well-cited, though Ash's comment on the use of two sources is a valid one when you have a much longer bibliography. You might consider adding links to unfamiliar terms.Njclum (talk) 23:18, 12 December 2016 (UTC)