User talk:Fuller2019/Tonic water

Peer Review from Tim

Overall great work! Added my peer review and just wanted to let you know. Thank you!412timothy (talk) 01:00, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

Hi! This is Isabella from COM 481. I peer reviewed your article on your sandbox page! Just wanted to give you a heads up. Thanks, --Bellamila13 (talk) 00:22, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review from James

Hi, I've left you a review! Jameshu1 (talk) 00:22, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Preliminary Review from Kaylea

Hi @Fuller2019:

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

One area that needs improvement is the choice of sources. Blogs and promotional sites that don't follow a strict code of quality are usually not acceptable.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:12, 27 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Hi @Fuller2019:

This article looks like it needs more work before it would receive full credit for this assignment, but you have approval to move it to live if you are ready. If you want to, you can move it to live and then continue to work. Adding more material that is good quality will help. The goal is to advance the article by a quality class in ways that demonstrate engagement with the norms of Wikipedia.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:51, 9 February 2022 (UTC)