User talk:Ellamarrero/sandbox

This page is very thoroughly done--great job! My main comment is I noticed a few typos. In paragraph 2 of the biography, you have "until his father died in 1d662," and in paragraph 4 you have "w where he presented his work and was subsequently elected a fellow in 1662." Sejohnson1 (talk) 04:37, 15 February 2020 (UTC)

Very excellent article! I also spotted a possible typo in the first sentence of paragraph 4 in addition to two mentioned above. Expanding on his work a bit, if he published anything else significant might help round out the article a tad. Jhhayman (talk) 10:06, 15 February 2020 (UTC)

I don't have many suggestions for your article as it very well written! Your language is clear, concise and presents the information in a neutral way. The structured sub-headings when discussing his book grant greater ease and clarity to the page.Megan Reyna (talk) 17:24, 16 February 2020 (UTC)

Your contributions so far are well-written, and the media you added makes the page look a lot more robust! One suggestion I have has to do with the subheading "On the modification of clouds." I didn't realize until reading the body of the section that this referred to one specific work of Howard's. To make this stand out more on the page, maybe consider putting this subheading in italics. Great job so far! Sejohnson1 (talk) 16:08, 18 March 2020 (UTC)