User talk:Edtechguy46/Brainify

Suggestions for improvement

If there is anything significant in those college newspaper articles, it should be extracted and incorporated into the body of the article. As it currently stands, it looks like a valiant effort to pad the resume with what (with one exception) are links to college papers, not famous for their high editorial standards on most campuses (I have written for many such papers myself). You also need more citations not to the subject's own website; and blogs are right out. --Orange Mike | Talk 20:06, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Please also see WP:CITE for guidance in creating more useful footnotes; the present ones are almost as useless as raw URLs. --Orange Mike | Talk 20:10, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Ok - thanks Mike. i will keep plugging away at it. Edtechguy46 (talk) 16:47, 2 March 2009 (UTC)