Your edit to Cool (aesthetic)

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Hi and welcome to Wikipedia. I quite like your edit to Cool (aesthetic), but I'm afraid it's the wrong style for Wikipedia. Have a look at this for a better idea of what the right kind of style is. I hope you stick with Wikipedia in the future and make lots of useful edits. garik 19:43, 16 December 2006 (UTC)Reply

Don't start thinking of it as my article! It's just one I take an interest in for various reasons. It's as much yours as mine, but we're both constrained by the same rules:) I like your essay (though it would benefit from being grounded with more references), but I don't know where it would fit in better... Maybe try this[1] - I don't know much about it yet, but I like the sound of it. If you get into it, please let me now how it goes. If it's crap, please tell me too.garik 05:16, 17 December 2006 (UTC)Reply