User talk:Dolichovespula/sandbox

Latest comment: 9 years ago by C2zhaobi in topic Peer review

Peer review

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Hi, nice job on your paragraphs. It is really nice that you have lots of information in your introduction. Just a minor point in case you did not notice, there are some words that do not have wiki links that are showing red, for example cerebral phaeohyphomycosis. I think it would be better to not link it in that case. Also, I think it would be a good idea to have a section that discuss pathophysiology of this fungus since it involves human infections. C2zhaobi (talk) 00:29, 30 October 2014 (UTC)Reply