User talk:Djon141/sandbox

Peer Review- csmi433

Where is the article draft?

Peer Review

I believe everything in the article stayed on topic and the information seemed very neutral. There were no opinions are claims as in a research paper. The sources were very good and accurate. Each statement has back-up in the sources. The student has sources even from this year so it is up to date. The links are very well put into the article. I think the information is evenly spread out ion the article. After "anthropology in 2010" I would put a comma and lowercase 'f' instead of that sentance fragment by itself after this.

Csmi433 (talk) 05:48, 28 October 2018 (UTC) csmi433