User talk:Dgreeny21/sandbox
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Josefhoracek in topic The Lead
Adding Sources
editYour sources look great. Go ahead and add them to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:03, 12 February 2017 (UTC)
- You should remove the all caps from the second citation. Otherwise, a good job. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:39, 26 February 2017 (UTC)
The Lead
editYour lead will definitely improve the article. I suggest that you get to your point quicker. Delete the first two sentences completely, and start with "Cricket injuries inflict all parts of the body..." The rest is good.
Don't use slashes. Just write "foot and ankle."
Post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:23, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
- Please make the changes by Mar. 3. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:41, 26 February 2017 (UTC)