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The article overall maintains a neutral tone and mostly credible citations; however, there are gaps where citations have been left out and sections that need more explanation. For example, the section titled “Youth Justice” does not cite the source where the author attained this information. The section “Deferred Sentencing and Jail Diversion” does contain links to related Wikipedia article although it may also be helpful to cite how the list of diversionary measures was compiled to begin with. Additionally, the section Prison Reform either needs further explanation or could be left out of the article entirely. It does not provide details as to how prison reform is implemented and it takes away from the overall effectiveness of the article. This section also lacks proper citation which also weakens its effectiveness. content.Currycrisp (talk) 04:33, 9 November 2017 (UTC)Bergmanucsd (talk) 8:32, 8 November 2017