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Hi Cpirrung. I thought the below might be helpful. I realize you've probably spent a lot of time on the article, but my suggestion would be to start from scratch, taking what is worth salvaging from the current article and using option 4 to get feedback and coaching. (see below from my custom template) Corporate 13:36, 21 October 2012 (UTC)Reply


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