Oona's peer review of the Diane Glancy article
editThis article is very well written and I don't think much needs to be changed or improved! Here are just a few things I caught while looking it over:
Is there a citation for these lines in the "Life and career" section? "At a young age, she had a hard time with determining her identity because of how her Indian lifestyle did not relate to what she was learning in school. Glancy decided to reclaim her Cherokee descent and found it easy to express in her poetry."
In the second paragraph of "Life and career": "Glancy is an English professor and began teaching in 1989..." Because she retired in 2011, I think this line should be written: "Glancy was an English professor..."
Did you find any citations for the awards she's won?
Other than those things, I think there isn't anything crucial missing from the article. The order of the sections is good and there isn't anything off-topic. The article does a good job remaining neutral and the sources are reliable.