User talk:Cgdevlin/The Three Ages of Man (Titian)

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Nice work on your draft. Some things you could do moving forward

1. When you copy your changes back into the article, don't paste the lead above the infobox. Leave it at the very top of the page.
2. The lead should summarize all the major points of the article, so it should reflect your additions to the body of the article.
3. It's more conventional for Wikipedia articles to start with "History", so I would leave that above the "Subject matter" and "Composition" sections.
4. Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization. Only the first word (and any proper nouns) should be capitalized. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)