User talk:Cdb1220/Dietary indiscretion
Peer review of article Dietary indiscretion by user Cass-stock
Lead: Good lead reflecting the most important information from the article. Would be helpful to add references to this section so that you can see where each statement is coming from.
Structure: The sections are well organized in a sensible order.
Balance: All information on topic. Dietary indiscretion in animals section focuses on domestic animals. If it occurs in animals in the wild, it would be beneficial to include a section on this as to fully represent the topic.
Neutrality of Content: Content is presented in a neutral manner.
Sources: Each section with the exception of the"Dietary Indiscretion and Diabetes" section seems to only have 1 source attributed to it. Additional sources in each section will allow for a more balanced article. There are also statements in the article not attributed to any source.
Additional Notes: Good use of images. Article is written in a manner that is easy to understand. Significant contribution to the original article.
Peer review of Cdb1220's article draft titled "Dietary indiscretion". Peer reviewed by Debm73
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General info: Peer review of Cdb1220's article titled "Dietary indiscretion". Peer review by Debm73
Lead: Good strong and clear lead that introduces the topic well.
Content: Good amount of content. Interesting content. Adding statistics may help give the reader an idea of how common/uncommon the behaviour is.
Tone and Balance: Good neutral content. Good tone and balance of the article.
Sources and References: Good amount of references. Good scholarly sources.
Organization: Well organized and well written.
Images and Media: Nice images May want to add a video clip of the behaviour to enhance the reader's understanding.
Overall impressions: Great well written draft with interesting content. Please "content" section as well as "images and media" section of the review to see how the article can be improved. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Debm73 (talk • contribs) 01:58, 3 November 2019 (UTC)