User talk:Cassandrajc/sandbox

Hi Cassandrajc! I like what you've got so far--very interesting! In terms of feedback, I just have a few suggestions:

1. I'm not sure if someone else is covering the treatment section, but I did wonder what the non-surgical treatment techniques were. Perhaps even just a nod to the fact that it's talked about earlier if it is (ex. "typically respond to non-surgical treatment techniques such as those described in the "Treatment" section). 2. It would be neat to insert links to the other wiki articles about polyps, fibrous masses, cysts, or pseudocysts. Also I think there is a typo for "pseudocyst"! 3. Can you talk about what the prognosis is after surgery, if it is indeed necessary? 4. When you write "same reference," I wonder if the Wikipedia format might prefer if you just re-cite those references in the link format like you do in the last sentence?

All the best with the rest of your article :) Ajtrainor (talk) 21:28, 29 October 2016 (UTC)

Hello Cassandrajc! Nice work with your sections! I agree with the suggestions Ajtrainor has made.

1. It could be good to insert a link to "benign" for users who don't know that term. 2. Maybe you could say "The EXACT prevalence is not known" since you do go on to report some data. 3. Something in this sentence sounds a bit funny. I think it is the use of the term, prognosis. "The prognosis of requiring surgery would only occur after an exhaustive attempt at non-surgical therapy techniques has been applied." Perhaps it could be something like "Surgery would only occur after....".

That's all I can see right now. Good luck with the rest of the project! Ananaslp (talk) 22:42, 29 October 2016 (UTC)