User talk:Carlematsu/Information Control Division

Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful!

My general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next. Another area to improve as you revise is maintaining a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic. You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: WP:NPOV.

Also, you don't need to keep (and won't want to keep....) the headers that were provided by the wikiedu template (lead, body, etc.). Go ahead and pull those out and use the real headers the article needs.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 23:02, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

"peer" review from Kaylea

Hi @Carlematsu:,

I did the review we discussed since you didn't get a volunteer reviewer from the class. Take a look at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Carlematsu/Information_Control_Division/Khascall_Peer_Review

Kaylea Champion (talk) 23:42, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval

Awesome work. You are approved to go live with this article.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:

1. Final read-through draft.
2. Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
3. Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
4. Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
5. Note on article talk page.
6. Note at the top of your sandbox version.
7. Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
8. Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:38, 11 February 2022 (UTC)