User talk:Caligulaforprez2024/Roman concrete

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Forgetfulpumpkin

Hello! I just finished your peer review. I really enjoyed the pictures you added and I feel that they greatly enhance your Wikipedia page. The captions were clear and concise. I feel that the information in your draft adds to the page and I liked that you provided dates and stats about roman concrete. I felt that the page was very science heavy in terms of how concrete works and why it works. I feel that adding more historical elements may enhance your page further and round it out. I had some questions that I thought may help you while you continue to edit your page. Questions: Why was concrete concrete so important and revolutionary to Roman society? How did concrete effect the Roman economy? Did the production of concrete create jobs for the Roman people? Who invented it? Why was concrete important? Were their any specific people or names that were involved? I hope the questions are helpful as you are moving forward. Overall, I feel that you are on the right track and doing well. Good luck! Forgetfulpumpkin (talk) 08:26, 20 November 2020 (UTC)Reply