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Brian's Peer Review

To be clear, I'm just pasting this peer review in. Looks like you've got a couple of sandboxes going, I posted this review to one of the others. I'm pasting it on this sandbox which looks more active for the project...

Brian's Peer Review[edit] Just a couple of quick notes including some stuff we talked about in class. The webpage for the Brazilian National Archives is difficult to navigate, it'll definitely take some effort to find good information. The "In The Media" section had some possibly relevant articles from September of this year about the fire that destroyed the National Museum. There seems to be some controversy between the Ministry of Justice who says everything is fine and the fire department which does not. Also, it looks like the National Archives are overseen by the Ministry of Justice and the Minister of Justice is currently Torquato Jardim. You could show that hierarchy in your article. Also, Torquato Jardim has his own Wiki page you could link to and include a photo which I'm assuming is from the Commons. I couldn't find an annual report for the Brazilian National Archives but in working on my page (Australian National Archives) I found some useful facts and figures in there regarding staff size, budget, etc. You may have better luck finding that than I did.

I looked at your edits from last week, the language is better, and less subjective, I'm assuming English is not the first language of the last editor.

Last thing, it looks like the 3rd reference footnote link for Acervo is broken, that will need to be cleaned up or removed I suppose.

Quannstar (talk) 16:41, 13 November 2018 (UTC)