I think you did a really good job adding more useful information. However, the only thing that I would change would be fixing some of the sentence structure in the article. When I was editing my article there were a lot of run on sentences and I had to change a lot of them. Therefore, that might want to be something you want to fix so someone else does not have to do it. Overall, your page was great. Mzazver1 (talk) 02:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC) Mzazver1