User talk:Brinly jones/Hours of Jeanne de Navarre

Peer Review

Hi Brinly!

The intro is great and easy to understand but there were a couple parts in the following sections where the sentence structure needs some tweeking, also maybe check for redundancies. The structure looks great and I think once you get everything paraphrased the flow will make sense. One thing is that you have spent a bit more time talking about the artist than the book so just make sure so talk about both equally. The content seems like it will be neutral. The sources are much improved from the original article and they all seem reliable. great job! DaisyBearP (talk) 05:26, 6 April 2024 (UTC)