Instructor Comments No. 2

Well-written

Good work thus far
Would like to see more on the geography of the area.
Residential Section would be useful. Doesn't need to be large, but if you can take a photo of a few homes that would be great.
Try linking to other articles inside wikipedia using double brackets.

Verifiable with no original research

Well done here.

Broad in its coverage

Again, would like to see residential.

Neutral

No issues here.

Stable

No Comments.

Illustrated

Latest comment: 9 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Good work on the photos.
Try adding an info box at the top of the page; see Arena District Example.

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:22, 9 December 2014 (UTC)Reply

Hello! My name is Chad and I am peer editing your page for our CRP2100 final project. I have a few edits bellow, which I listed under the particular section in which they appear. Overall, think your page looks really good! I imagine content for this neighborhood is pretty slim, but did you find in info on cultural/entertainment aspects to the neighborhood? Are there any particular businesses of note that are located in Riverbend? I feel like your page could use at least one more section to round out the content? Otherwise, keep up the good work!

Intro section

The opening intro section about the neighborhood should have the boundaries of the neighborhood included, or at least move the Geography section up above the History section.

History

The link to the Virginia Military Land is a dead link. Perhaps link it to an external website that talks about this land?
It is not clear what a "260 land holding" is. Did you mean 260 acre land holding?

Landmarks and Notable Locations

Heinzerling Foundation

I might revise/rearrange this paragraph a little to make it clear what the foundation is, before telling where it's located or when it is open.

The American Legion

The sentence " The Legion itself was chartered in 1919 as veterans." Did you mean "charted by veterans"?

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