Great first start on the Gold effect. I believe it would be beneficial if you wrote more in the heading that includes "cholesterol." You could also find more cases where the Gold effect was used in the past in science and make more subheadings detailing the phenomenon. It would be good to have 2-3 subheadings about it. Maybe you could also include a section that has links to the Gold effect or a subheading that talks about how to prevent the Gold effect. Great job!