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Ben, you have done a great job researching your species here, and your writing and organization are both very clear. As you continue to work on this article addition, one suggestion I would give you is to state where what you have written here will fit into the current article on this topic. Will you add any new sections, or will your information go under the sections that already exist for this article? If you will add new sections, I would suggest checking out the Wikipedia Species Articles handout that is posted on Bb for suggestions.

Second, when you reference journal articles, do be sure to state the full information, including author, title, journal, etc. Third, it would also help the reader if you linked key words in your article to other Wikipedia pages - for example, linking to a page where the reader could reference more information on the life cycles of mussels would be helpful.

Last, be sure to not use any direct quotes in your article - put this information in your own words. Also, as you consider ways to add greater depth to this article addition, the topic of toxins could be interesting to explore further. Where does the mussel pick up these toxins, and what kinds of toxins are they? Rhirshorn (talk) 23:21, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

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Sorry for the late response~ Professor Hirshhorn I will be sure to make a sentence under each section in reference to where each section will go in the Zebra Mussel's article, most of them are just adding on to the current article or adding a bit more depth/clarification. I will also update my references and remove quotes.

Thank you for the feedback! — Preceding unsigned comment added by BisforBiology (talk • contribs) 04:43, 5 December 2016 (UTC)