User talk:Beeman.26/sandbox

Instructor Comments No. 2

Well-written

• You should expand each of the sections that you have. Write a lead paragraph about each neighborhood, add photos.
• Break apart the Parks and add information (this is quick to do)
• What about Historic Districts?
• Historic Landmarks on the National Register?

Verifiable with no original research

• Well done here.

Broad in its coverage

• Not bad, but talk about architecture a little too.

Neutral

• No issues here.

Stable

• No Comments.

Illustrated

• Get photos in here. That is really needed.

164.107.47.208 (talk) 17:19, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:22, 9 December 2014 (UTC)

Clark.2063 (talk) 02:55, 5 December 2014 (UTC)Hey this is kevin and I'll be commenting/editing your sandbox content. I completely understand the struggle of finding enough content to post about your neighborhood. I think you have done a pretty good job of defining each area within your neighborhood. I am sure you are desperately searching for more info; with that being said i suggest adding some graphics/pictures to your sandbox. This will enhance your page and make it more viewer friendly. I should speak for myself because my page needs graphics as well, but I thought it was worth mentioning. Clark.2063 (talk) 02:46, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

I just saw that you plan to add three images..good job. Just some more ideas for you to think about - is there any entertainment going on in your neighborhood? Attractions? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Clark.2063 (talk • contribs) 02:51, 5 December 2014 (UTC) You could also add housing and income statistics. What is the average income? what is the median home price? Also consider adding some information regarding the local schools in your neighborhood - any statistics on that? do the schools have any notable programs? sports activities? Anything you can think of to add is never bad. You could add an entire demographics section if you would like.Clark.2063 (talk) 03:03, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

All in all you are well on your way to a very good wikipedia page. Keep working - add the graphics, consider my suggestions and you should be fine. Clark.2063 (talk) 03:09, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

2nd Draft

Notes from the class editor: I agree with your peer editor, I would add a section about entertainment, you could probably have a whole section on the franklin park conservatory. Also think about adding a section on demograpics Kowalski.118 (talk) 13:21, 9 December 2014 (UTC)