Beckycraig10
Joined 8 March 2007
Latest comment: 17 years ago by NCurse in topic AITO
AITO edit
The question is not whether this article should be featured in wiki or not, but the state of the article. The Great Rail Journeys is written in a neutral form, but tha AITO article contains several non-neutral statements (Consumers booking with AITO operators are assured of financial security, high quality holidays and excellent personal service) that's why I deleted it. If you would like to work on the article to improve it, I can restore it for your anytime. Thank you for your appreciation! NCurse work 19:50, 14 March 2007 (UTC)
- Look, in my opinion the problem could be the style: if an article contains a sentence like that ("high quality holidays and excellent personal service") then I'd say it doesn't represent neutrality so it must be deleted. I took a look at the ABTA article and it's totally neutral. You should try to write a short description of the artice in neutral style (WP:NPOV). I hope it helps. NCurse work 20:05, 28 March 2007 (UTC)