User talk:Awaldera18/Article Draft

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@Awaldera18, Crnogorac15, Cwall511, and Feeny95:

• References go after punctuation, not before, and there shouldn’t be spaces before refs. I fixed some of these, but you should check that they're all fixed.
• Section headers should use sentence case; only proper nouns and the first word of each section header should be capitalized.
• Reference 7 is blank
• There are missing references in the text. I see several uses of a (3) and a (5) - they aren't real references but, I assume, placeholders.
• The Anatomy overview says "see Anatomical terms of location". It isn't clear what you're talking about here.
• Your first section isn't a proper lead section. A lead section should summarize all the main points made in the article. This is more of an introduction.
• Your first three sections don't have a lot of links to other articles. Any terms that the average reader are unlikely to be familiar with should be linked the first time they appear in the article.
• There's a lot of important information on the existing Laminotomy article including {{infobox_interventions}}, several footers and categories. As you update that article, make sure that existing information is preserved. If you're replacing sources, are you replacing them with better sources? Is any important information of links being lost? Remember that you aren't replacing the article wholesale, you're integrating your additions into an existing article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:30, 31 March 2017 (UTC)