User talk:Avtrigg/sandbox

Tone

Great paragraph, follows tone well. Figure out how to add style to the article, using the headings and citation buttons Wikipedia provides. Reference the tutorials and/or links in the libguide for a refresher about how to properly cite specific sentences. Specific terms that the reader may not know, eg. belt press, s.cervisae should point to an existing Wikipedia article if it exists. Search Wikipedia "Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking' to learn how to do this. Look at the Apple Cider/Commercial Production section for suggestions. Your paragraph discusses technique and style. Maybe share some information with a group mate so they can discuss style and you technique.It may be helpful when migrating information. Bryantlib (talk) 03:05, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Before making the paragraph 'live'

Remember to work with group members when uploading to the live page to ensure you dont upload the same information. Also consider how you will insert your information into the existing cider page. You may have to break up your sentences or not include everything depending on the information that is already on the page.

PROOFREAD your paragraph before you make your information 'live'.

Before you post make sure one person in your group created a new section on the Cider apple talk page you are uploading to, letting the people watching the page know you are making edits. And also make sure you summarize your final change, when submitting to the live page. If you don't remember how to do these steps, re-watch the tutorial. :)Bryantlib (talk) 15:40, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Content

Need to have a better flow among the topics that you are discussing. You jump from topic to topic without much of a transiton to let the reader know.

References need to be added as per Wikipedia guidelines. See trainings from earlier in the course or see Selena for help.

Please coordinate with others in your group to make sure you're not duplicating information and references.Ciderprof1 (talk) 17:28, 7 May 2018 (UTC)