User talk:AustinThomson/sandbox

Feedback

@AustinThomson: The article is coming together and it's off to a good start. A few pieces of feedback:

• You need references to reliable and third-party sources to establish notability under WP:ORG. You need to do this before you move your article in the main namespace.
• Watch tone and try to stick to a neutral and objective tone.
• Keep in mind that being comprehensive is not the goal here. You should include information that one might expect to find in a good encyclopedia article.

That's it for now. Keep working on it and once you think you've handled the WP:NOTE angle, go ahead and move it to the main namespace. —mako๛ 19:42, 23 October 2015 (UTC)