User talk:Asj'a Thompson/sandbox

Hello my name is Domonique Lewis and I am new to wikipedia. DomoniqueL (talk) 20:15, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

Peer Review

I really like the amount of detail you put into your article. Also, your word choice is scholarly and shows your interest in the topic. Maybe you could include examples of the hazardous acts that the children in India are forced to do, which will paint a better picture in terms of explaining the harsh conditions that minors are exposed to. Deashiaterrell (talk) 05:12, 14 November 2017 (UTC)