User talk:AshRecord/sandbox
Peer Review
editI love how you spoke about Anti body effectors I see what you were trying to do and I love it. I saw that you put some very good citations which are good. My favorite part while reading your draft was when you hyperlink the key terms that were very dope and useful for readers. I love one of the examples that you gave about cellular signal transduction.
I feel like you could have a gave an example or touch base on hormone signaling and immune response because you brought it up. Even though you touch base on it the readers who view this can wonder what this is. Also the picture you gave I tried searching it up but I couldn't find it is it possible you can give the picture another to check to make sure ?
-sam Ballaman365 (talk) 04:11, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
- I will keep that in mind. Thank you! AshRecord (talk) 16:58, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- Also, I found the picture through Wikipedia, so it should be fine. Couldn't hurt to double check AshRecord (talk) 01:20, 16 November 2022 (UTC)