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Joined 6 November 2015
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Dick Bos in topic Some remarks on your work in the sandbox about data visualization art
Welcome to Wikipedia! Romaine (talk) 16:50, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
- You can find the course page here: Wikipedia:Education program/Maastricht University/Autumn 2015. Romaine (talk) 16:50, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
Some remarks on your work in the sandbox about data visualization art edit
Hi Juliette! Please let me give a few comments on the text in your sandbox:
- You've done a very good job already! The text is very well written and readable. I enjoyed reading it.
- Perhaps you can work on the referencing in your article. See: Help:Referencing_for_beginners.
- I'm really glad to see that you did already make a few wiki-links in your text. Great. But perhaps you could make some more. Like for instance to: Edward Tufte, Data (computing) and so on, and so on.
- Did you think about the relation of your text to the existing article Data visualization? Is there enough differentiation between “data visualization” and “data visualization art” to make it a separate article? Or would it be better to incorporate your text in the existing article?
- Some of the links you give might be external links, perhaps (so in a separate paragraph at the bottom)? Like this one and the two that follow....
Unfortunately I will not be in your class, next Friday. But I wish you good luck with the job. Greetings, --Dick Bos (talk) 10:04, 26 November 2015 (UTC)