User talk:Amybarch/sandbox

Hi! My name is Joanna and I wanted to practice using a talk page so I figured I'd introduce myself.Joannaberg4 (talk) 22:53, 8 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi Amy! This is Brittney, one of your peer editors. Your notes look really good so far, but I'll check back in tomorrow or monday when more of it is done! So far I like the sections you decided to break the topic off into! Also, my page isn't close to being done either I'm hoping to get a lot more done tonight and tomorrow! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Brittconigs (talk • contribs) 21:19, 16 June 2018 (UTC)

Hi Amy! This is Xintong Di. I can see from your sandbox that you have a lot of things in mind to add them on to the final version. I appreciate that you really did a lot of researches of what you want to write on. Also, you explained the motive and current situation of the written topic (which I think I didn't do). Based on your references, I can see they are all very recent, so I guess the topic has more recent findings and researches. However, you may consider reduce some contents and focus on several aspects of the topic in depth. I really admire your effort!Xintong Di (talk) 04:49, 17 June 2018 (UTC)